Monday, October 15, 2012

Creative Challenge 225... edge

Surrender

He came to the edge,
The edge of himself.
He looked in the mirror,
It glared back at him.
He knew he must change,
But change wouldn’t come.
He stayed at the edge,
The edge of himself.

Was there a hope?
A hope for change.
Could things be made right?
It glared back at him.
He longed for a change,
But change wouldn’t come.
He fell to his knees
And asked for help.

4 comments:

  1. a very emotive piece, Jacob....and I do believe 'he' looked for help in the right place!!

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  2. this almost brought tears to my eyes...excellent!

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  3. Excellent piece!!!! Sometimes change comes when we expect it the least...
    Thanks for your visit.

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